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earthman buck
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earthman buck
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08/27/2006 12:58 am
Yeah, I'd change the song up more, but writer's block is a serious thing with me. It took me like 4 days of solid thinking to come up with the little bit that's there.

Do you think It'd be any better if I dropped all the "And I swear I thought I saw you there" things from the verses? I'd be willing to do that, but I have a couple problems with it:

1) That makes the verses really short.
2) It screws up the "And I saw you there, it's love" part at the end, which I intended to kind of surprise people with. Abrupt ending, you know?

Anyhow....thanks for taking the time to read it, guys. Any ideas for a title?

If you say "And I swear I thought I saw you there," I'll sock ya. :)