Ok, I'll take the opposite stance.
First of all, typical newbie mistake.... I can't listen to your music.
The link doesn't work... all I get is a generic page with some apologetic stuff about who you are... but no music.
I've lost interest....

So... what's your next step??

If you post something here, I want to click on it and immediately hear what you sound like. I want to know you're serious about what you're doing.
I don't wanna screw around with generic sites where I have to sign on etc...
I just want to click on your link and hear your song.

Right now, you've failed completely. I can't hear your music cause you used a generic online service instead of doing it yourself. I'm discouraged because you have no faith in yourself as a musician.
You've lost me as a fan.