Interesting.

For some reason this reminded me of Cream and some of the Atonal Acapella compositions I've heard at my College's composition recitals.

With that said, you have some interesting material to work with, but if I were you I would work on bringing everything together as "tight" as possible. Make sure that the intervals between each voice are exactly what you want them to be ( most likely this piece is to be tonal so I'm guessing 3rds and 5ths to make up tertian chords ). Anyway, keep it up; its refreshing to hear different stuff like this on a guitar based forum

Peace.