hmm, where to begin....
.... at the beginning?

The acoustic track has to be redone. At times is seems like its actually pulling the drummer off tempo! Maybe a 12-string. Stroke it, and let it ring.

I like that the mix allows the vocals to be heard clearly. I'm embarrassed by what I'm hearing, though. :o New lyrics, and a singer with better pitch.

Good playin'! :cool: