The acoustic at the beginning sounded kinda off, I'm not 100% sure how, the timing just sounds wierd. but from the start of the first lead onward it sounds fine. also, the vocals from 3:22 onward are terrible. I like the voice of the vocalist through the rest of the song though, though the lyrics kinda suck like jolly said. I really like your leads though, but I think that they could be a little louder, and maybe turn your mids up a little more. overall it was really good though!