Well done, Jeff, that was excellent! The rhythm guitar was, on the whole, very well done. You actually have a very nice singing voice, but it sounds to me like you need to mic it up a little ( or maybe it's just my dodgy computer speakers :o ). The minor fall in "Walking Away" was a very nice touch. You've got a really good idea going with "Ke Jia" - the timing on the lead part needs a bit of tweaking, and the rhythm overpowers the lead a little bit in the chorus, but it was great other than that. Good work, mate - keep at it!

Oh, and by the way - "when bottle caps and literature adhere" is an awesome tagline! :D