I won't comment on the rythm as I don't really dig that kind of heavy metal, but your lead licks rock! I would get rid of the dive bombs though-but thats just me. Anyways I enjoyed it, and I love your band name.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB