the ands are more "an" than "and" in the song... and the acoustic riff that i use with it has a little chord change by way of a hammer-on on the "and" so it doesn't really mess the flow up... but i can see where only having read the lyrics you could say that. thanks for the input though
any more feedback?? i think the biggest thing i'm looking at is content... i had a clear idea in my head but we all know how that can sometimes not work itself out between the head and the paper... sometimes it gets lost in translation.
