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ericthecableguy
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ericthecableguy
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12/22/2005 7:43 pm
Tobacco perhaps?
Funny little ditty. :)

Just a suggestion. The last line should flow better. Maybe add a word before lead.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.

METOOB