Well, there's a number of things going on with your recording that might cause it to be less clear sounding.

1) Overall hiss. The signal to noise ratio is pretty high.
Basically, either your amp if you're using one, or your effects pedal is causing a whole bunch of hiss on your recordings. So much that it's muddying everthing else.
2) Too much wet reverb. Turn the 'wet' reverb down just a bit so that the individual notes are easier to hear.
3) Playing that could be tightened up. Your playing is good, but you're missing notes and flubbing things like letting your left fingers brush up against other strings and not being more precise with your picking hand.
4) No compression. Just a little would be enough to even out the sound.
You can run your recording through a denoiser and compressor and it cleans it up a little bit. You end up losing some frequencies though...
ie,

http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/cleantest.mp3

5) Stereo: It sounds like you're using a chorus which would sound a whole lot better with some stereo separation in it.
6) Distortion: There's not much but on your high E string you can hear some clipping on a couple of notes.