This is a tune I've been attempting to get the vocals done for several months now.

[HIGHLIGHT]http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/NeedOpinions.mp3[/HIGHLIGHT]


I've auditioned several singers but nobody's worked out so far.
So I tried doing it myself.
My own vocals are softer than I'd like but I need to get some opinions on whether they fit the song and whether it's worth continuing with it.

ie, do the vocals fit the songs? ..
... there's harmonies coming too but should I hire a singer rather than do it myself?
Or in other words, would you buy this tune if you heard it on the radio? ...
or is it cheezy?

Any comments, negative or positive appreciated.