hi guys. I made a christian song, and i'm hoping you guys can give me some feedback, if it's good i'll extend the length, if it sux, then i'll probably change some stuff

https://home.comcast.net/~jwenlee/My_Bridge_Demo.mp3

I really want honest feedback, so i can take any critique, just be honest please.

Oh by the way. You might have to turn up the volume, and u might hear a wind kind of sound, it's just my mic getting screwed up (i have the ones that come with computers X_X), thanks! :D