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hunter60
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hunter60
Humble student
Joined: 06/12/05
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07/14/2005 11:01 pm
Here's a piece of one I was writing a little while back- if you can think of anything to add, I would appreciate it.

Another long and lonely day
No longer on the ball
A huge and empty pain in my chest
Camped out here in the hall

What the hell happened?
Where did it all go wrong?
My life's not a ballad
It's not even a half-hearted country song.

It wasn't supposed to be this way,
'Genius', the said.
Now they don't remember me.
I might have been famous if I were dead...
:)
[FONT=Tahoma]"All I can do is be me ... whoever that is". Bob Dylan [/FONT]