I'm rubbish at the actual lyrics, so what I tend to do with the band is put together the guitar part, and then hum over it like I imagine the vocal line being. Then it's over to someone with an idea about these things to fill that bit in....
I did an English Literature degree, and tried to do the same as you - write music to fit my poems - I could never get it to work either.... :confused:
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