Originally Posted by: werdnarolyatbut seriously thanks for your constructive criticism, we'll take that into consideration cos its important that the lyrics come across as challenging to both Christians and non-Christians alike. great advice Jolly, thanks. :)

Hey, thanks for accepting it! I was a little worried you'd take offense. It's wonderful to see a songwriter willing to take criticism, especially from someone who himself isn't a great lyricist by any means (see purevolume.com/bobtotherescue ) hahaha! :D