PRSplaya
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PRSplaya
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Joined: 09/19/02
Posts: 3,941
01/11/2005 9:35 pm
I think it sounds great! It has really good flow to it. Aside from a few gramatical errors, it is just fine. Especially since English isn't your first language.
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