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Jolly McJollyson
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Joined: 09/07/03
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Jolly McJollyson
Chick Magnet
Joined: 09/07/03
Posts: 5,457

09/14/2004 2:32 am

Ok, It's ok. Makes a decent poem but I can't get a feeling for the rhythm here...but hey, I think you should change it to "too SOON it will be gone"

I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...

9/14/04
2:32 am