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05-21-2003, 07:58 PM
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Location: The Dark Waste land of eternal Blood
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The one is Called......... Blood and Darkness
I want blood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The walls of hell are smeared in blood
We drink eternally------forever.
Darkness will us.
leading us to the eternal smell od blood
Death and Loneliness rules the land.
A medieval vampire, ready to kill
eats the flesh of everything it sees.
Come, come with us into darkness.
Drink the blood and eat the flesh
Now your soul remains in shadows.
There is no passion within the darkness.
There is no such thing as love in this realm!!!!!!!
Blood Lust, we drink eternally. Blood!!!!!!!!!
Blood-Blood-Blood-Blood
Death-Death-Death-Death
Blood-Blood-Blood-Blood
Soaked in a puddle of blood,
We feed on flesh------pure flesh.
Time to die, there's no escape.
Join us in darkness of forever you will
DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My new black metal lyrics, tell me what you think.
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Blood, is what makes me a true vampire. Darkness, is what makes me a God.
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05-21-2003, 09:23 PM
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I think you should see somebody...
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05-22-2003, 02:47 PM
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I think the first line of the last stanza should be "soaked in a field of blood" or "a sea of blood." A "puddle" of blood just doesn't fit the picture of largescale bloodshed that the rest of the song describes. This song makes me want a steak--rare.
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05-22-2003, 03:30 PM
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laughable my man!
I hope ur not serious
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05-23-2003, 05:38 PM
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Can you say Therapist?
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05-23-2003, 06:01 PM
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Ok, if you're gonna write Black Metal lyrics, or just dark ones for that matter, check out some bands who actually know how to, like for example Cradle of Filth.
Oh and that was, sorry to say, laughable. What's the deal with blood anyway? It's not that scary. It's just blood...
Now if you were to say something like: "Crimson tears, drops of blood shed by angels, devoured by demons", now THAT would be dark.
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06-01-2003, 11:31 AM
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I agree with Tele Master and Gainer. Cradle of Filth is probally the worst band that I've listen to.
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