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Old 04-02-2003, 08:49 PM
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Why will love always leave one last scar
And the final words like a dieing star
Why does no one extend their hand to aid
Only relieved they don't feel such pain

If you could only know
You'd never love again
If I could only show
You'd never love again
If you could only know
You'd never love again
If I could only show
You'd never love again

How could I have sunk this low
A monster, not the one you know
Never will know why it tears me apart
And now faking indifrence is my art

Never again
Never again
Once again
Never again
Never again
Once again
Never again
Never again
Forever again

If you could only know
You'd never love again
If I could only show
You'd never love again

If you could only know
You'd never love again
If I could only show
You'd never love again

If it sounds repetive at parts, you have to here it with the music.
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Old 04-03-2003, 07:22 PM
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Sounds pretty good, probally not anything I would listen to though.
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Old 04-05-2003, 09:23 PM
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sdf

i dunno if thats a good or bad thing lol

thanks for readin it though
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Old 04-06-2003, 11:52 AM
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A little too much repitition, of course i haven't heard the song yet so it might sound good like that.
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