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Old 11-08-2002, 01:09 PM
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CLAUSTROPHOBIC

claustrophobic
thats what i am
have to show it
the best way that i can
scared of me
you should be
please my needs
and i wont be sad

they're all locked doors
i've checked a thousand times
and i'm going out of my mind
the only thing that conforts me are my shouts
cause there's no way out
and my voice is breaking
my bloods rising
and i fall on the floor

chorus

i'm labelled with a name tab on my sweater
to advise poeple not to get closer
cuase i might just pull a fit or scream out loud
and scare the crowd
and my voice is breaking
my bloods rising
and i fall on the floor

chorus

it's hard to wake up and know that you got nothing
but pills by your beside just waiting
take them one at a time...you might shoke
whocares, they'll pull it out of my throat
and my voice is breaking
my bloods rising
and i fall on the floor

chorus

they lock me up in my own world cause i'm a danger
used to have a life but now thats over
so many thoughts in my head i've yet said
but no one listens i'm out of my head
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Old 11-09-2002, 05:17 PM
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Christ! That's a cheerful song!

All mine are depressing too. It's good finding a way to use bad experiences to make music. A couple of years ago my life was hell and all I ever did was play really fast in really horrific creepy scales. Now I'm happy to say I'd never have got as far as I have without the pains that made me so devoted to my art.

Have you written any music for it yet?
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Old 12-24-2002, 01:56 PM
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i did wirte music for it but i'm kind've a beginner in guitar so the chords are simple and the songs really really long...

personally i think the rhythm is really really good!!
but hey thats just me

dov.
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Old 12-30-2002, 02:48 PM
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That's cool. I like writing music from bad and good experiences. My music is usually about hate, being hated, love, not being loved. I've had alot of experience in those fields. lol.

But that's cool, writing always helps express your feelings, and I find it the best way.
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Old 01-06-2003, 11:24 AM
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that was awesome!

loved the song man.
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