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06-01-2002, 03:47 PM
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One flash It happend so fast
Things got messed up incredibly quick
Has time frozen?
Why does it have to happen to her?
why not someone else?
Someone who deserves it,
not her, not her.
She is too sweet,
too nice, too hot.
Things got ****ed up again.
Things just got ****ed up again.
Just make it all go away,
make them all go away.
Just make it stop,
things just got ****ed up again.
It all got complicated again,
You just never know when.
Its like the world has stopped,
like a car with no motor...
it just stopped.
Will it ever start going again,
It will, but when?
Things got ****ed up again.
Things just got ****ed up again.
Just make it all go away,
make them all go away.
Just make it stop,
things just got ****ed up again.
Its all a waste of time,
Its all for one more dime.
Fine, you got your dime,
what now?
now, your stuck in a hole.
Its the biggest one ever,
How are we going to get out?
well thats the first song i've ever written and I wrote it one night when I found out about how one of my good friends was physically abused by her dad. What you guys think?
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06-03-2002, 01:38 AM
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That I'd have beat the **** out of him...
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06-03-2002, 09:29 AM
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Ya, thats a good idea! But anyways I was more adking about the song and not the situation.
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06-03-2002, 11:16 AM
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I know, that's what's cool about my answer...
Anyways, I'd have to hear it to know if it's a good song (or a song I like, that doesn't always go hand in hand)...
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06-04-2002, 07:00 AM
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A song is everything;the lyrics,the melody,the way you sing it,the arrangements,everything.
It's kinga hard to rate a song on the strength of it's lyrics alone.
Aerosmith's "I don't wanna miss a thing" was written by Dione Warren.I can imagine if she'd given those lyrics to,say,Britney Spears,or Toni Braxton,the end result would have been very different from that song as you know it(assuming you know it),even tho' the words would be exactly the same.
So....
[Edited by kingdavid on 06-04-2002 at 06:03 AM]
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06-05-2002, 11:08 AM
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Ok, well its not necicerily a song (yet...). Just consider it a poem.
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06-25-2002, 10:28 AM
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dude.. sounds like you listen to too much blink182
ive always wanted to write something about egyptians, ever since i heard creeping death, but i swear metallica have already used up all the good stuff, but oh well, thats me ramblin on
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