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Old 06-14-2011, 02:57 AM
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Hey guys tell me how is it ?

I wrote this on ENVIRONMENT DAY !
Its called My Home !



MY HOME


My environment, My home

So beautiful, so green

That i can't watch it go down

Can't watch it turn black and brown



And Jane are you coming home

Cuz we should save what we have

And then search the same in universe

As i want to see and hear what i have felt in my nerves



And i know the world doesn't care

But i still stand here

To make it sure

That i and the lives to come here

Have life That is pure



I wish if this comes true

As I love me and you

And i know its hard to do

But i am a son of one who

Don't give up and turn blue

No matter what comes new



So i don't care what it takes

To make my home safe

I am to make it strong

I love my environment

My environment is my home !
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Old 06-15-2011, 01:28 PM
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Hi, nice words! You may want to check out the songs featured on www.playingforchange.com. It's not exactly about the environment, but it concerns the world and the people on it. Another "earthy" song I love is Julian Lennon's "Saltwater". Have a nice one!
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Old 06-16-2011, 09:38 AM
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Thanks !

thanks buddy !
It was an instant thought
and instant desire so i wrote it
i appreciate your appreciation !http://www.guitartricks.com/forum/e...tpost&p=266398#

and thanks for the additional information
i will be posting more lyrics and songs
as i want to be a musician !

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