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Old 04-03-2007, 06:35 PM
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please give a listen and perhaps some advice.

Thought I'd post a little something to see if anyone might give me a little advice as to how to improve it. Thanks in advance.

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Old 04-05-2007, 12:57 AM
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Just listened to 'El Samba' . Sounds fine dude. I think the main thing to work on from here are your dynamics whilst playing lead. It sometimes seems that you are playing each note exactly the same way with the same inflections, which gives a sort of flat feel to the music.
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Old 04-06-2007, 04:43 PM
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They're all good. The composition the playing all very well done. I see Julian's point on El Samba. Echo'd Reflections has a very relaxing feel to it but I think a nice mellow lead guitar over it would make it pop.

Just some thoughts.
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Old 04-07-2007, 08:04 AM
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Hey there,

Julian made a good point on the dynamics. It sounds like every note is played with a down stroke.

Apart from that, I think the composition is great. Nice note choices dude
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