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Old 07-24-2005, 01:31 PM
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i wrote this song for my bestest friend ever! i just moved away from her for the second time in my life and we've been friends since 3rd grade, 1997, this song came to me soo fast, and i had the lyrics down w/in an hr, i'm still workin on the music and chords, but its comin along....wut do u think?


'97

youre the last leaf danglin from a dying tree
youre the last pedal hangin from a dryed out rose
youre so strong
and youve always been there for me
youre so brave
youre the one that i could always see

chorus:
your my guardian angle
uniquely sent from heaven
who was put into my life
and i'll love you, from '97

youre the last winter snowflake from the crispy frost
youre the last springful droplet before the summer heat
youre so strong
you always held on till the end
youre so brave
and always took me close within

chorus:
your my guardian angle
uniquely sent from heaven
who was put into my life
and i'll love you, from '97

forever,
i'll love u till the end
and ever,
i'll be close within

bridge:
we're gonna miss the prom
in every single way
we're gonna miss the one
graduation day
but no matter where life takes us
i will be close within
cause no matter what will happen
i will love u till the end

your my gardien angle
uniquely sent from heaven
who was put into my life
and i'll love you, from '97

(slower)
it was 1997
when this angle
fell from the sky
into my heart
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Old 07-24-2005, 02:13 PM
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I have to say that I liked it! definately a good song, not very much common cliches... which is good. I thought it was extremely good. keep up the good work!!!
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Old 07-31-2005, 12:57 PM
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I'm not a song writing expert, but I really enjoyed it. You difinitley had strong voice in this song, and I really like it when people write from the heart. Good job.
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