new song up instrumental, critics needed plz.

[flash2ace]

this is like my seventh instrumental thats going on my new solo cd, plz help a fellow musician out and let me know if anything is majorly wrong that i should change before burning onto cd, thanks. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/flash2ace.htm song=angles

[Dr_simon]

You might want to check the link; I got to your home page but couldn’t find any songs (I did try clicking "Music" and got an error message)

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[basics]

Now that I know where the search is, I've been looking up the word 'soundclick' to hear everybody's tunes. I've gotta say man, the first one that you've got there is pretty cool. For a minute and a half some dude is getting eaten by wolves and that's freakn cool. lol. Your actual tune is half decent, I'd remix it so the solo is up in the forefront and put another solo over the Orion type slow to heavy part. But sweet 'guy getting chewed on by wolves' part.