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Gainer
04-03-2003, 05:47 PM
This is part to a song of mine.

I'm a saint, i'm a sinner
kill the cook and ask "What's for dinner?"
Commit murder, save lives
Break a clock and ask for the time.

It don't matter what i do (i do)
cause no matter what it's all the same (the same)

The priest, is who makes them scream and
The liar, is the the savior of the
Brain washed F*ck$!

metalisbest
04-03-2003, 08:21 PM
I think you should just throw away because those are horrible lyrics.

Tele Master
04-03-2003, 08:29 PM
Take out the (i do) and (the same) for sure.

u10ajf
04-05-2003, 08:22 AM
Originally posted by Tele Master
Take out the (i do) and (the same) for sure.
I think that's a bit extreme! Personally I think there are some funny ideas in there. Maybe needs a bit of re-arranging though.