What do you think of these?

[daveichler]

Here are some lyrics i came up with on a train ride, what do you think of them?

Time feels like a neverending cycle
Sun rises in the morning, Sets at night
Only to rise and shine for a new beginning
And a brand new day

Proud of where I'm from
Looking Forward to where I'll go
I'll take this road one turn at a time
Enjoying life as it passes by

[icecool]

Thats pretty reflective dude, its cool, I enjoy lyrics like that.

Ill give you an example of bad lyrics:

DEATH DEATH DEATH DIE IM GONNA KILL EVERYONE.

but y'know, thats just me. :D

[daveichler]

Thanks a lot man, I can agree with your idea of bad lyrics. Any comments or criticism towards the lyrics I posted earlier would be really helpful. Thanks.