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Locomotive breath
08-15-2002, 08:39 AM
Well I woke up this morning and I had myself a beer,
I walked down to the jiffy and whupped up on this queer,
Went inside and saw a rag head standing near,
So I pulled out my gun and I shot him through the ear,
It's another non-returnable bottle..

Do I have a hit on my hands or what?
Lordathestrings
08-15-2002, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by Locomotive breath
...Do I have a hit on my hands or what? Only if someone puts a contract out on you.
Locomotive breath
08-15-2002, 01:05 PM
Originally posted by Lordathestrings
Only if someone puts a contract out on you. [/B]

Wait, there's more.

Well I got in the car and put my foot down on the throttle,
Drove down to the liquor store and I got myself a bottle,
As I left the store, I picked up a whore
she was cute, but she was no model.

P.S. I'm so over writer's block.
Locomotive breath
08-17-2002, 12:33 PM
Try this on for size..an old Elton John diddy.

It's a lttle bit runny..
as I look inside,
this toilet bowl,
smells like I died,
there's chocolate stains,
as I flush it down,
the bathroom walls are,
a darker shade of brown...
Locomotive breath
08-19-2002, 05:05 PM
He's a genius!
Incidents Happen
08-23-2002, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by Locomotive breath
Try this on for size..an old Elton John diddy.

It's a lttle bit runny..
as I look inside,
this toilet bowl,
smells like I died,
there's chocolate stains,
as I flush it down,
the bathroom walls are,
a darker shade of brown...


thats sick!!! dude i was eating chocolate ice cream when i read that! thanks for spoiling my appetite, man...




Just kiddin :D

but still, keep your bowel movements out of your lyrics.

[Edited by Incidents Happen on 08-23-2002 at 02:10 PM]
Incidents Happen
08-23-2002, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by Locomotive breath
Well I woke up this morning and I had myself a beer,
I walked down to the jiffy and whupped up on this queer,
Went inside and saw a rag head standing near,
So I pulled out my gun and I shot him through the ear,
It's another non-returnable bottle..

Do I have a hit on my hands or what?


well first of all you stole the first line from Jim Morrison.

"well i woke up this mornin, and i got myself a beeeer."

its on the song Roadhouse Blues, and half of america would recognize that line as a morrison line.
Locomotive breath
08-23-2002, 07:34 PM
Yea, I stole the opening line from Jim Morrison. But there has been a lot of lines stolen from others.
Incidents Happen
08-23-2002, 09:08 PM
thing is, if your 'song' gets very very popular, and if you stole a line off of somebody else's song, without giving them credit for it, thats like plagerism...
Lordathestrings
08-24-2002, 08:26 PM
That jingling sound you (should) hear is your chain being rattled :D
^Chacron^
08-25-2002, 02:06 PM
Hmmm something tells me someone has a rhyming dictionarry......

Not always a bad thing though....some awful rhymes can make great songs. Somehow I think Locomotive has discovered a talent for comedy-rock :D
Christoph
08-25-2002, 08:29 PM
http://www.rhymezone.com/

- The perfect resource for mediocre poets and songwriters everywhere.
Josh Redstone
08-26-2002, 10:42 AM
Originally posted by ^Chacron^
Hmmm something tells me someone has a rhyming dictionarry......

Not always a bad thing though....some awful rhymes can make great songs. Somehow I think Locomotive has discovered a talent for comedy-rock :D

Maybe he and Weird Al could do something together.
Incidents Happen
08-26-2002, 09:03 PM
Originally posted by Lordathestrings
That jingling sound you (should) hear is your chain being rattled :D

well i didn't know it was gonna be comedy-rock, in which case the bowel-movement song would be entirely acceptable.

but i was just imagining a bluesy type song talking about taking a ****, and a 'darker shade of brown', which got me kinda queezy...
^Chacron^
08-27-2002, 05:34 AM
Originally posted by Incidents Happen


but i was just imagining a bluesy type song talking about taking a ****, and a 'darker shade of brown', which got me kinda queezy...

Lol, reminds me of the blues number I wrote about Roadkill:

Excerpt:
'I like the feel beneath my wheel
The head goes crunch the blood congeels....

You kill it and we grill it'

People felt the same way when I sang it to them :D
in_your_guts
09-04-2002, 11:26 AM
to the kill it and grill it now that is comedy with the clasic duh duh da da blues riff
MikeP.
09-05-2002, 01:50 AM
as long as you get a PMRC label on your disk..I'd say it would be hit....hehehehe
^Chacron^
09-05-2002, 05:37 AM
lol...yeah, i put a blues backing track to it :)