Newbie to song writting would like some feedback

[mnchdrk25]

Kid Doctor of the Soul

https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1074881

[Neal Walter]

Hi mnchdrk25,

That's a good first try. One thing that has helped me to improve my recordings is playing with a metronome, this way the music is "tighter" and more in sync with the other instruments.

Keep writing, you'll learn something new every time!