Stand strong. Tyler Smith

[guitarboy313]

So I am going through some rough times right now, going through alot and this is just something I wrote to cheer myself up and its hands down the best song I have ever written hands down. I believe its good what do you guys think?





(Verse 1)

Like the lonely winds

I blow by everything

I move doors and push walls

In my way obstacles

(Chorus)

Nothing is going to take me down

Nada is going to bring me down

Stand strong and have my will

Keep my head up and stand strong

(Verse 2)

Its just a giant game to us all

Until we start losing we don't care

You never forget what it feels like to win

So we try so hard we make ourselves lose

(Chorus)

Nothing is going to take me down

Nada is going to bring me down

Stand strong and have my will

Keep my head up and stand strong


(Bridge)

Blasting sublime in my head phones

Giving myself the smooth calm

Feeling the music in my bones

Listening to the lyrics

Can you feel it

Feel it in your body

(Chorus)

SO nothing is going to take me down

Nada is going to bring me down

Stand strong and have my will

Keep my head up and stand strong

Just stand strong

Stand strong on my own two feet

Stand strong no crutches

Do you see me now

[hunter1801]

Hard to critique a song without the actual song. Are you just asking if the lyrics are good? Right now it just reads like a poem.

[guitarboy313]

Yea, I am just looking for a critique on the lyrics. Its good but I agree it does read like a poem.