the blues

[g-dude]

VERSE 1

I wake up in the morning

When the sun is donning

Jest wish I could stay in bed

Under the cosy blankets

Not put on my jackets

Jest stay home instead

CHORUS

I wanna pick up my guitar

Write a new a new bar

Jest wanna play the blues

I wanna play my song

All day long

Wat av I got to lose

VERSE 2

I watch television

Rather go on a mission

I’ve seen it all before

Fed up of TV

Jest think ill drink my tea

Or walk along the shore

CHORUS

I wanna pick up my guitar

Write a new a new bar

Jest wanna play the blues

I wanna play my song

All day long

Wat av I got to lose


please tell me wht u think of my song and any improvments i can make
i also need help to think of a third verse so post ideas
thanx
g-dude x

[tmac4919]

Not bad at all. Since this is a blues song, you need to include alcohol and women.

Fed up of being alone
Jest think ill drink my whiskey
And walk along, to find my baby.

;)