Europa cover

[mpaq]

My first shot at an instrumental cover. . I know its not technically correct and the ending is cut short, but I had fun with it for what I can do. Crits welcomed.

Mpaq's Europa (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=789879&content=music)

Thanks for listening :)

[mpaq]

121 views and nobody cares to comment? does it suck that bad? :eek: ......seriously, how could this be improved/what should i focus on?
Timing is one issue that i know could be better, anything else?

thanks
mpaq