ROCK SONG! style of taking back sunday/lost prophets

[sheepy770]

hey everyone, i have uploaded a new mainstream rock song called "over soon" on my myspace

www.myspace.com/sheepyuk

any comments/crit/questions much appreciated!

[Kevin Taylor]

It's just me but the production is good as is the instrumentation.
However, halfway through I had to turn it off because of boredom.
Just too much like a million other monotone songs.

Like I said though, it's not my style of music so I may be missing the point.

[oib111]

I thought it was pretty good. Btw, idk if you meant do that (you probably did), but when you double tracked your voice you made it so it was two people talking at once, instead of blending the two tracks. But once again, you probably did it on purpase.