New song!!

[Porterbt2]

Tell me what you thing of my new song it's called "too Late"
not quite finished yet but please tell me what you think

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/SRVNumberOne/

[dvenetian]

Sounds like you're off to a good start.
What I would like to bring your attention to is Percussion and how it plays the roll within a piece.
Here's a simple progression by Frank Marino called Dragonfly, listen to how the change in tempo adds to the song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9KzU-UiT7A

Here's another, different genre, but this song says it all; Listen to Bill Ward completely rule over this song, using what looks like a 5 piece toy drum set.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvuI8d57N9I

Now view the song again with a huge Tama set and no where near the same drive or guidance.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IvbA8FBd_Vo

[JustinArmstrong]

I liked it a lot, Porterbt2! It has a lot of potential.

I liked the progression a lot (the same as the song Kryptonite, but your take on it was different and creative).

Is this planning on being an instrumental song or one with lyrics? If instrumental, I recommend coming up with a simple melody that the listener can identify with that you can repeat 2 or 3 times throughout the song. It'll act similar to a chorus, and bring unity in the song.

I liked the 2 solos. Very tasty, nice guitar work.

Overall, well done. Keep on working at it.

sincerely,
Justin Armstrong

[jasonggabbott]

very good!!
I think I even got lyrics for it