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DAMAGED ONE
07-06-2007, 12:55 PM
Pedal to Metal

Ram your foot down hard on the gas
So you can feel the power of the engine blast
100 miles an hour is never to fast
So push a little further or you wont last

Pedal to metal
Your life bet on some wheels
Pedal to metal
You gotta have nerves of steel

I’m gonna hit 180 all the cops I pass
Mashin my foot down hard on the gas
Turn off the lights through the dark I go
You wont hear me coming cause your hearings to slow

Pedal to metal
Your life bet on some wheels
Pedal to metal
You gotta have nerves of steel

When I saw you hitching on the side of the road
That’s when I knew your moves weren’t to slow
With your spike high heels and a tight red dress
I’m about to lose control I must confess

Pedal to metal
Your life bet on some wheels
Pedal to metal
You gotta have nerves of steel
jeffhx
07-06-2007, 06:43 PM
i like the imagery dude...i dont really find it cheesy...nice and concise song...what style would you be playing it?
DAMAGED ONE
07-11-2007, 09:56 AM
i like the imagery dude...i dont really find it cheesy...nice and concise song...what style would you be playing it?hard drivin Rock Simple 4/4 time
Weslaba
07-11-2007, 08:41 PM
Well that is nowhere near cheezy if you compare it to the songs I write. :rolleyes: Pretty good though. I have the same problem though, you will probably agree that you can never picture any famous artist using lyrics like your own. I actually did like the song though dude. I'd classify cheezy as like Raffi kinda stuff, or like a song I wrote awhile back.

We Want It
We Want It Our Way
We Ain't Gonna Have It
Any Other Way

:D Thats the chorus, but you get the idea. :cool:

*Edit*
If you wish to hear this song, check out THIS (http://www.myspace.com/jawzband) The song title is "The Next Genderation" Enjoy the cheezy-ness
hunter60
07-12-2007, 07:00 AM
I like it. You gotta love a good car song. Rock and Roll is riddled with car tunes. They go hand in hand, unlike songs about food. There just aren't that many tunes out there about a nice pesto sauce... :D

In all seriousness, I don't find this cheesy at all. Kinda has a Deep Purple feel to it.
DAMAGED ONE
07-12-2007, 10:06 AM
I like it. You gotta love a good car song. Rock and Roll is riddled with car tunes. They go hand in hand, unlike songs about food. There just aren't that many tunes out there about a nice pesto sauce... :D

In all seriousness, I don't find this cheesy at all. Kinda has a Deep Purple feel to it.Aww Yeah DEEP PURPLE You get Rep again :D
DAMAGED ONE
07-12-2007, 10:08 AM
Song for sale $50.00 U.S. :D
hunter60
07-12-2007, 10:12 AM
Aww Yeah DEEP PURPLE You get Rep again :D

Heck man, I grew up on Deep Purple! LOVED them. Machine Head may be one of the greatest straight up rock and roll records ever made!
DAMAGED ONE
07-12-2007, 10:29 AM
Heck man, I grew up on Deep Purple! LOVED them. Machine Head may be one of the greatest straight up rock and roll records ever made!Yep! A must have CD in a collection. I have it! :D