random on the spot thingy

[jeffhx]

http://www.purevolume.com/jeffhx2

it was on the spot so i dont know...i shud work on it more...but i procrasinate...eventually forget ...hope not tho...be critical...because i demand it... :D

ohyeah its called 'don't speak'

[iiholly]

I'll check it out when I get home from work.

[blueradish]

Dude, that's fricken great! I think the "on the spot, raw feel" totally adds to the song. Right up my alley as that is the type of slow singer/songwriter stuff I record.

Nice job!

[jeffhx]

:D cheers dude! yea was just messin arnd and was like...woot..so i did some random writing to go with it...

[Kole_Music]

I think your guitar may be a little out of tune and it could definately be perfected a little more rhythmically and developed melodically.

With that said though, I agree with the other poster that this Raw feel has a sense of true musicality to it. I don't know if you sing much, but you have a good voice; however I believe you shouldn't restrain yourself as much and project it.

Keep on learning and playing. Peace.

[Superhuman]

Very chilled, I thought the vocals were great, nice and layed back - suited the music well. Not what I sually listen to but I liked it none the less.