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DAMAGED ONE
06-13-2006, 01:03 PM
www.myspace.com/factorydamageband

DAMAGED ONE
06-19-2006, 01:10 PM
New songs on GarageBand.com
BLACK ANGEL and NEGATIVE WORLD
www.garageband.com/artist/factorydamage
Please let us know what you think??? :D

magicninja
06-19-2006, 01:48 PM
The music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.

pure
06-19-2006, 02:14 PM
I'm with magic. for such a hardcore track, its kinda weird to have such a voice.

like having shakirah sing for slayer.

DAMAGED ONE
06-19-2006, 02:24 PM
I'm with magic. for such a hardcore track, its kinda weird to have such a voice.

like having shakirah sing for slayer.Now thats Funny :D
Were kinda diffirent from the norm kind of a new style or sound. :cool:

DAMAGED ONE
06-21-2006, 06:53 AM
The music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.What do you think about Negative World its about a guy that wants to kill himself but keeps backing out.

DAMAGED ONE
06-21-2006, 06:58 AM
The music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.I wrote the lyrics to Black Angel, Its all about a guy with those mind-madding voices in his head telling him to do bad stuff all the time. :D

DAMAGED ONE
06-29-2006, 09:44 AM
New songs on GarageBand.com
900 Subpoenas and NEGATIVE WORLD
www.garageband.com/artist/factorydamage
Please let us know what you think??? :DCome on guys let me know what you think good or bad I can take it.

Jolly McJollyson
06-29-2006, 06:49 PM
Sweet Megadeth/Metallica type riffs.

Your singer sounds like a bad version of Dave Mustaine.

Jolly McJollyson
06-29-2006, 06:51 PM
What do you think about Negative World its about a guy that wants to kill himself but keeps backing out.
Subtlety is not in your vocabulary, is it?


Regardless, very cool Megadeth-esque song. But the lyrics are WAY too up front, man, throw something somewhat poetic in there. The melody RULES, though.

DAMAGED ONE
06-30-2006, 07:57 AM
Thanks Jolly Point well taken. :D

DAMAGED ONE
06-30-2006, 09:47 AM
Subtlety is not in your vocabulary, is it?


Regardless, very cool Megadeth-esque song. But the lyrics are WAY too up front, man, throw something somewhat poetic in there. The melody RULES, though.Hey, You cant beat around the bush if you want to conveay a big message in a five minute song. :D

Jolly McJollyson
06-30-2006, 04:43 PM
Hey, You cant beat around the bush if you want to conveay a big message in a five minute song. :D
Hmmm... Touche.

DAMAGED ONE
07-13-2006, 07:51 AM
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Leedogg
07-13-2006, 04:55 PM
You're band is pretty badass. Keep up the excellent metal style. You can definately tell the Mustaine-influence in your singer's voice. I loved the heavy riffs.... I'm 2:20 into Negative World and still waiting for a blistering solo....ahhh there's some tapping... Good tunes dude!

DAMAGED ONE
07-14-2006, 08:45 AM
Thanks Dude, Were trying to bring back and hold true to the metal music that has meaning and a message you know. Thats also not screaming all the time you can understand the lyrics and music and thats the thing thats missing in The Heavy Metal of today. Jack :cool: