A new song! I re-wrote an old one to ROCK!

[Jolly McJollyson]

They Feast upon our flesh
No Mercy for our souls
When hell becomes too full
The dead will rise up cold

The living cannot stand
They won't survive the night
Unless they can avoid
The horror spreading bite

ZOMBIE ATTACK!
Devouring
ZOMBIE ATTACK!
you cannot be saved
THEY ATTACK!
RUN!
ZOMBIE ATTACK!

They kill us not for need
Their hunger never dies!
How slowly they approach
How blank and cold their eyes!

The blackened empty stare
Where human thoughts have shone
How paniced now we run
our kingdom overthrown

ZOMBIE ATTACK!
Devouring
ZOMBIE ATTACK!
you cannot be saved
THEY ATTACK!
RUN!
ZOMBIE ATTACK!

But can the dead be stopped?
The living have a chance
Though hell may spit up souls
We'll stop the dead's advance

In running we would die
As living dead pursue!
The risen never tire
And they're coming after you!

ZOMBIE ATTACK!
Devouring
ZOMBIE ATTACK!
you cannot be saved
THEY ATTACK!
RUN!
ZOMBIE ATTACK!

[crazywolf]

That was amazing. It sounds even better rocked, guaranteed!!

[iiholly]

You just saw Land of the Dead didn't you? Pretty good, did you write a song similar to it before?

[iiholly]

Wait, my question was answered when I saw the title of your thread. :cool:

[Meta]

alrite jolly ...time to start recording come on make that cd foo!

[Akira]

Jolly... get out. *points to door*

[alucard0941]

Your too hardcore for this forum...

[Jolly McJollyson]

Your too hardcore for this forum...
you guys should hear the keyboard string synth intro...ho ho HO! Paul and I were writing it and just cracking up the whole time. Like all these diminished chords resolving into the minor. Like C diminished and then BAM C minor. It was a riot.

[6strngs_2hmbkrs]

as I was reading it, I was playing out in my head how I would make that song sound. pretty much a 2-3 note lick at the end of each line of the verses, and the chorus just had some heavy sounding palm muted power chords

[6strngs_2hmbkrs]

oh, awesome song by the way