Does this suck

[Hamberg]

I have a feeling that this song sucks. I can't tell if it is good because I've heard it so many times during the writing process. Can you please critic the song GD.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm

[CW14]

I have a feeling that this song sucks
Well it doesn't! Its a good song.

I can't think of any advice that I can give you, except add vocals.

[R. Shackleferd]

I agree, good job...but I got lost at 1:07 - 1:11. Something in the rythym and flow just seemed a lil off to me. As for the rest of the song in general, I suggest playing with just a little more feeling or oomph or whatever. Not that it's sloppy in anyway, but just a tad more bite if you know what I mean. But again, good job so far.

[Ardnek234]

Well all I know that is your MUCH better then me! I think its good, but yea add lyrics!

[Superhuman]

Nice piece, good melody. I think that it could do with some kind of variation in the middle to take it in a different direction for a bit. I always try to either change the key, timing and or rhythm to add some colour. I like the track but I wouldnt stop there with this one. I would add a solo in the middle and a few short licks every now and then to add another voice to the mix. It has great potential and sets the background tone for some nice lead work. I hate vocals in music, so by all means leave them out!

[frylock2021]

I agree good job and it could use a lead I like leads very much but in the end it is your song so you do what you feel is good.

[cayotic727]

The people who told you it's bad are very wrong. It's not bad it's different, which is refreshing, unless its different and sucks :p but this is good, i agree it should have vocals and lead guitar.