Rate my first metal song ( Beginning Only )

[Sabinz]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/auroraflashmusic.htm here is the link just click on lo-fi next to the tume and listen then give me your advice and rate it plz.

[Hamberg]

that would make a pretty good verse man. I personally wouldn't make it the chorus just because it sounds complicated, and probabily would be difficult for the average listener to get hooked on.

[koRn_freAk]

from a scale one to ten, I´d have to say, seven, those are some good riffs and all..